This week, we have been working on some more sick sentences. We started off with a picture of an old railroad, and some sentences that weren't very good. We talked about what was in the picture and we talked about how we could make the sick sentences better. While we did each fix our own sentences, we also fixed them as a class. This is what we came up with...
They sat in the creepy, spooky woods. As they lit a smokey fire, the mist rose up into the air. They constructed a tiny campsite with miniature logs. While they put up their tent, they told scary stories. Suddenly they heard a paranormal noise floating through the woods, and they felt a bizarre feeling inside.
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