- introduce ourselves
- say what we were selling
- describe the jersey's purpose (so that you would want to buy it)
- give a price
- say where you can buy it from
Have a look at some of our adverts- would you want to buy any of our jerseys?
By Cadie and Faith
By Ruby and Aiden
By Tia and Lukus
By Briana and Ananta
Scarlett and Tyrese
Hi South Hornby School, We are from Yaldhurst School.
ReplyDeleteGood job! We like how you held the jersey up so we could see the logo. Maybe we could try and do that too! Next time it would be good if you could all speak just a little bit louder. Did you think about what was in the background of your videos?
We are divided as to whether we would buy your jersey's because we wouldn't be able to use them at our school with your logo!
From Te Mahuri 1
Hi Te Mahuri 1,
DeleteThank you for your feedback. We agree that we need to do our videos in a quieter space next time. Briana suggested that next time we need to sell some jerseys with different logos on them so they can be used at different schools? What do you think of this idea?
From Team Toi Toi
Hi Team Toi Toi. Do you like cybersmart? Kererū likes cybersmart, did you know we did a jersey advertisement as well as a scissors, pen or pencil advertisement. Have you done a scissors, pen or pencil advertisement? From Blake A in Kererū at WPS.
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