Well done, Zane. We loved reading your story and, like you, we think that an earthquake may have caused that crazy road situation that you saw on the learning site. It was a good idea for the family in the story to go home another way. It would have been like driving on a roller coaster otherwise!
Here is the picture that Zane was writing about- Write what you think caused this crazy road in the comment section below!
Great work Zane! Look at that epic writing. It looks as though you are really enjoying that game.
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Well done, Zane! I like that you used some adjectives in your writing like 'bendy' and 'scared'.
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Wow Zane, what awesome writing! I like how neat and easy to read your writing is. Great work. - Miss Pringle
ReplyDeleteGood job - Jackson
ReplyDeleteI think you did a very good job. I like that they turned around - very sensible. Piper H
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