This is a Year 3 and 4 class blog at South Hornby School. We are in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where we will share our learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment. Please check out our individual blogs as well.
Friday, August 20, 2021
Twisty Road Writing by Bella and Austin
The twisty road picture has been a popular choice for writing this week! Have a look at Bella and Austin's writing.
Great way to start a story, Bella. 'Jake could not believe his eyes.....'. Austin and Bella, I love that you have completed detailed, interesting writing which makes the reader want to keep reading. Excellent work, do you think that is a real road somewhere in the world or a made up picture? Mrs M
well done
ReplyDeleteAwesome work guys! Love all the interesting stories about the crazy road. Can't wait to see what you do next week! - Miss Pringle
ReplyDeleteGreat way to start a story, Bella. 'Jake could not believe his eyes.....'.
ReplyDeleteAustin and Bella, I love that you have completed detailed, interesting writing which makes the reader want to keep reading. Excellent work, do you think that is a real road somewhere in the world or a made up picture?
Mrs M
Bella, I like roller coasters - especially never-ending ones!
ReplyDeleteAustin, I like the part about the ladder not reaching up the squiggle road
Piper H