This is a Year 3 and 4 class blog at South Hornby School. We are in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where we will share our learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment. Please check out our individual blogs as well.
Wednesday, September 9, 2020
Check out our very cool class story so far. We have been working on writing complex sentences.
What awesome writing you have got here. I loved how many adjectives/expressive vocabulary you have used to describe the animals. This really helps to paint a picture in my mind as I read it. Reading the sentence about the giraffes slimy tongue , reminds me of the time I went to Orana Park and fed the giraffes! I love that you left us wondering. What made you add that question at the end?
Hi Whakarua 2,
ReplyDeleteWhat awesome writing you have got here. I loved how many adjectives/expressive vocabulary you have used to describe the animals. This really helps to paint a picture in my mind as I read it. Reading the sentence about the giraffes slimy tongue , reminds me of the time I went to Orana Park and fed the giraffes! I love that you left us wondering. What made you add that question at the end?